This is THEIR environment I shouldn't be constantly waiting for them to realize something obvious.Third, the premise is fascinating but wasn't fully explored (presumably to leave plenty of room for sequels), and the main characters haven't even followed a few of the implications very far, although they've had plenty of time to do so.Versions: The voice acting on the audio version was good. A bit more work to show they were acting reasonably but still thwarted would have made the whole thing less frustrating for the reader. Yet, they continually make the most stupid and obvious mistakes as the easiest way to progress the story. A major complication that affects time travel stories is simply hand-waved away.Second, the people making the changes are at least average intelligence, and probably above. He discovers others who are also making edits with no possible way of doing so. I'll keep this vague and no spoilers beyond the first couple chapters (and I'll keep things vague anyway).First, a fundamental flaw with the premise, when the entire concept hinges on changing a file and the protagonist soon goes where he has no possible cell connection, wifi, etc., absolutely no way to affect the file. Amusing story, but with several problems that really detracted from the fun for me.
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